You win.
You win.
Wait, where's your piece gone? Please tell me you didn't take it off, I was really hoping for a strong challenge :(
@ 0:48 -- increase the volume of that piano! Just disable the reverb on it at that point!
The reverse fx near the end really makes the track unique. I may steal some of your ideas o.o
King Bosa! I shall take your advice once I have time to polish up the track. I'm glad you enjoyed the reverse fx - it's actually the last piano part reversed and laid twice over the part playing forward in real time - thought it would be a neat way to signify the "death" part. You are always more than welcome to steal my ideas - 'tis an honor!
I love the sound of this. I just wish the lead was a little less 'outspoken.' I may create an orchestral style piece similar to this someday.
Hmm a different sound for the lead could make that difference, but im really glad you liked the track!
Good structure, mate. This was good, I would just suggest you work a little on your vocal range and make sure your harmony is the correct pitch.
Very good!
thanks man, i didn't do the singing I only did the music :-)
Harmony that leaves me speechless. Wow, now I see why you are the best; the greatest on Newgrounds.
My soft heart says (in prayer): "I need to marry somebody who has talents like yours."
Aww, thanks Bosa! I think you might be emphasizing just a tad, but I appreciate it all the same. :D
Not bad, sir. I cannot wait until we collaborate to create a stunning fantasy piece.
Old man Crinklelimpskin, you're at it again! I hope you and your band will perform at my next party.
my one-man band that is. ;)
The lead instrument almost sounds like a dark carnival, but I can also see why you chose the title. I like the string staccatos, although somewhat repetitive you did a good job keeping the song intriguing. I could hear a flute instrument in the background which added extra filling to the mix, so I can honestly say that you are on the right start. It is always good to add extra things here in there to give your song a unique sound.
I applaud your good work.
I greatly appreciate your review, and I will strive to make my songs less repetitive in the future.
Hit me up anytime you want!
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