It's too loud, and I'm too old
Of course, I could only hear the ringing of my ears after the song had ended, so that means you produced something worth listening to.
I really liked the filter you added on the guitar at 1:51 -- I could actually imagine an entirely different song with this part being added into the middle; something awesome beyond imagination. But of course, the song you've produced here is quite awesome indeed.
The strumming at 3:17 was well placed, however I feel that mastering it may have been an issue for you.
Again, you've made a great song here, and I'm proud to compose against you in the Deathmatch Competition. I actually had another song made for the competition, but I thought it wouldn't be fair to you if I was to repost with a new song. I'm actually quite eager to see if you can beat the song I originally made for the comp.
I have confidence in your talent, and I will most definitely keep my eyes on you for future hits like 'Broaden Your Sound.'
-Bosa