Not Bad, Not Good Either
Work harder on the voice acting, and try to make it.. "not too random." We like things random, but not that random. Take some notes off of Family Guy. Also, respect towards you and good luck in the future.
-ßosa
Not Bad, Not Good Either
Work harder on the voice acting, and try to make it.. "not too random." We like things random, but not that random. Take some notes off of Family Guy. Also, respect towards you and good luck in the future.
-ßosa
:( but I like random
Sorry, man
I cannot give you my approval that this is a good flash movie. Respect towards you, but try harder. Improve some story, sound, and most of all, the music. Good luck to you, and god speed.
To be bluntly honest with you, I didnt really try. This was made in a few hours with a song I got off the net.
Getting better
Improvement has been made in here. You fixed the voice sync and made auto quality as well. Much better than the last one. You still need to improve a little on the graphics though. Try to make another flash movie with some better graphics. Don't get me wrong though, these graphics are decent!
Your friend, ßosa
Thanks for the constructive critcism and why is everone paying out on the grpahics there not that bad!
but frankly u rock for you too like Jimi Hendrix so blahhh
AHHHHH
This is my childhood all over again!!! And for the last review by JuanCarlosII, YOUUUUU AREEE ONNN CRAAAACKKK!!
Awesome man..
I really liked this flash! Pretty random! Smooth graphics is the best here, but the sound could use some work. Overall: Good
we told you we tried to fix the sound but we failed. we are sorry but we cannot fix it till after experience.
Whoa..
Awesome DDR music!
Hee hee ^_^ thanks
Your drug shall not consume me
You may think you have taken over the people on giving you a high score.. but, you have yet to consume my soul.
i believe shoe bottom is taken already, of sorry being!
the drug of ours has come a close, but saving is she!
Yes
Not bad, Not bad at all. You could have had some music in there though. And.. the story just goes too fast. Try to add more onto it like.. instead of saying, "Hey, we found your dad's killer. Come on down!" say um.., "Hey, there's a place down cooper street where this guy knows something about your father's killer." And try to add in why he killed the father. Get what I'm sayin'? I've only created about 5 flash movies and I don't intend on sumbitting them on newgrounds. But, I do write novels and books. If you need any help with creative storyline.. I'm the one to talk to.one more thing, check out my music and see if any of it would fit in your next movie.
Your friend, ßosa
I'm glad and you are right, i will e-mail you later, thankz a lot.
HM?!?
GASP!! I understand this! This is most brilliant work. It took me a while to understand exactly what the.. creature was doing. Brilliant work of art! I need to keep seeing these strange things. Even though.. it reminds me of Salad Fingers. WAIT!! This is a character from the episodes.. hm.. I learn something new every day.
Your Friend, ßosa
Hit me up anytime you want!
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