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You are talented..

It seems Newground's quality does not match your song's quite perfectly, yet this song does give me quite a few images. First, I see as if a young, lost soul is walking through a snowy park.. looking through cold and seeing what is beyond happiness and sorrow. He begins to look up at the sky.. hoping for a new life, then.. church bells. He looks down to the ground, and sees exactly what crime he's commited. That crime is murder, and only now is he beggining to run. Running from the truth, running from the pain, running from fear. His pace is kept high, and he dissapears in the distant fog and snow. As we sit and watch, we wonder.. is man truly running and getting away, or is man running into his own demise and traps. Does this mean every time we hide from something, it makes it urge to get out, and hurt even more? I cannot say, for your beliefs are your own, yet I love this piece and I say that it is great indeed.

Well Done

-ßosa

Aresdev responds:

Wow, that is really deep! Didn't think of it like that while I was working on it, but you bring up some interesting points. I'd love to hear what you have to say about the rest of my work!

Oh..

I just so happened to come across this one. The score was something I do admire indeed. French Horns and bells is quite an intersting mix of instruments. As much detail you have added in these layers of instruments, I'm sure you put some time into this. I'm also sure you had a blast while doing it. Hm.. that Irina Brochin sure is handy isn't she?

If you're looking for a story like you always add in most of your reviews, I have one for this piece.

"The skies are of the darkest gray.. the thunderstorms are heavy in sound.. and the rain.. pours with the death and anxiety surely to soon come. Soon our hero is looking upwards to these skies whilst waiting upon his lonely fort walls. At long last the ultimate tale will soon unfold. As the hero tightly grips his long, steel spear in hand, the dragon pours from the gloomed skies with vicous roars sounding as loud as the thunder above. Its eyes glow red from the hatred and death of many men. As it closes in, our hero stances ready and waiting for the inevitable. Of course he will not survive this, but he is at a hope to see his fellow comrades in the next world. The dragon swiftly scoops down breathing fire from its nostrils at the shaken hero. Our hero was able to launch his spear at this godly dragon, yet in turn, losing his life. While the dragon screams in hopes to ease the pain from its pierced heart, it falls ever so deeply down to the dark bottom unable to be seen. So both the hero and the dragn fell, yet the contact was a great show in maddness and also hatred for another. Oh the bagpipe'n play, so the hero is now in peace."

After my solitude was over in writing this short story, I was able to see more in this song than what was played. Perhaps their is more to music than samples and fast paced techno.

-Bosa

MaestroRage responds:

what an interesting story! Truly it showed me a great and vivid scene, and truth be told I had never imagined the hero being killed, a noble and honourable sacrafice on his behalf for sure!

There is always more to music then samples and techno, even techno pieces have the power to tell a story, just not with as much clarity, and more abstract. I have yet to create a golden melody which I feel is out there. A song, a story that can move somebodies mind to such large degrees... I wonder if such a song could ever be made, what with music being so subjective, but it is a goal I have set for myself, and one I will tirelessly persue.

Thank you for the review and story Bosa, truly it was an interesting one. I'm glad you liked the piece.!

To leave a good word..

I just happened to come across this tune while wandering around the classical section. I must congratulate you on your first attempt at a classical. Quite well, but a techno style close to the end doesn't match at all in the classical genre. That added some diversity, yes, but lost point in originality. Yet, with that aside, I can easily see your first attempt in here, and it was a good attempt indeed. There is much to learn if you are planning to stick some more classical tracks in your arsenal. But, you do what your soul thrives towards. If anything, I've learned that to continue after failure is to continue on the road for success.

-ßosa

dj-Nate responds:

Wow. I don't know what to say man, that was.. INSPIRING. Thanks ALOT!

Yep

I grew up and remain where bluegrass rules. Even though you didn't match it perfectly, you still did as good job. Maybe if we ever the banjo in soceity again, which I'm sure all we'll see is a guitar, we will find truth and meaning within music. You sir, you put all you can in this song, and it actually has some meaning in it. I'm not a big fan of rap, and I probably never will be. They say this and that, and it's done. Well, bluegrass adds flavor in your life. It'll change and it'll grow. Boy, I'm glad I live in the south. That's where the good stuff sits.

-ßosa

No

Perhaps you should use your own work.

i give it an 8 cause im a goodman

i give it an 8 cause im a goodman

I would vote higher since you're a victim of the ZeroVoter, but this doesn't float my boat all the way.

-ßosa

i give it a ten cause im a goodman

i give it a ten cause im a goodman

Anima-Theory responds:

you are a good man :D

Thanks :D

Anima

im give this a 10 cause im a good man

im give this a 10 cause im a good man
i like your song so i gve you a 10

-ßosa

A Good Piece

Oh, I do hate it when there are those that vote without listening to the song first.

-ßosa

Not bad, but not great

Did you use synth to make this? Anyways, I can't help but laugh at your remark as "Our Planet Pluto" the last I remember, Pluto doesn't belong to anybody. Religious humans think this whole universe was made for them I guess.

-ßosa

DrZonka responds:

lol, yeah, couldn't really think of a title

Hit me up anytime you want!

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